Being in technology this story is both satisfying and makes me hot under the collar. I would quit week one if I had to put up with that. I would tap Huddy with a sledgehammer.
As far as the story, one thing I was wondering is how you're going to structure the final novel. There isn't one protagonist, but I get the sense that's your intention. If you had four people, all dealing with the same thing, and you overlapped their stories in the end, that would be incredible. Sort of like, the antagonist is workplace surveillance, and each of the main characters will respond in different ways, with different outcomes, some good and some bad. If your intent is to go with a single protagonist, then you might have to rethink some chapters, so they are consistently first person omniscient or third person omniscient.
Right now, you're still the only serial I'm following consistently. You've got me hooked.
Hey Tom, looking forward to catching up on this, but I'm a completionist and need to start at the beginning. Hoping to delve in soon.
Tom
First time reader, scary shit, will read more later.
Lew
(SHS 1953)
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Being in technology this story is both satisfying and makes me hot under the collar. I would quit week one if I had to put up with that. I would tap Huddy with a sledgehammer.
As far as the story, one thing I was wondering is how you're going to structure the final novel. There isn't one protagonist, but I get the sense that's your intention. If you had four people, all dealing with the same thing, and you overlapped their stories in the end, that would be incredible. Sort of like, the antagonist is workplace surveillance, and each of the main characters will respond in different ways, with different outcomes, some good and some bad. If your intent is to go with a single protagonist, then you might have to rethink some chapters, so they are consistently first person omniscient or third person omniscient.
Right now, you're still the only serial I'm following consistently. You've got me hooked.
Great Chapter Tom, I sure hope something like Huddy never really happens but I can see how it might...I'd be long gone after a couple days of that!