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Patti Prance's avatar

wow, This was such an interesting read! It's pretty realistic fiction, I swear my phone listens to me!

I didn't completely understand the day one the references. Thank you so much for sharing!

MD's avatar

I miss 'Wizards' meetings that actually felt like that. Very fun read Tom!

Tom Pendergast's avatar

I’m glad you made it this far—I feel like the chapters really picked up steam at the end.

MD's avatar

The pace definitely picked up. I want more back story on Stamper.

Another story from a writer I read (And reminds me of you) just posted a new article. Look at that title!

https://elgan.com/the-things-bosses-are-doing-to-boost-productivity-are-killing-productivity

Tom Pendergast's avatar

Good, I’m glad you want more Stamper because that’s a big part of the second draft. I’ll check out the article

Nick Mayo's avatar

Really fun read - well done Tom!

Warner Blake's avatar

impressive, Tom, congrats.

Tom Pendergast's avatar

You went all the way to the end! Thank you